Draft 2 of our storyboard after making the changes Miss Deda told us to work on.
P.S Just realized that some of the shots looks weird especially for page 6, panel 45-48, with the camera moving in, out, in and out again. Will work on it and update this post soon.
Page six and seven don't work.
ReplyDeleteWe don't see the time pass and he become weak.
I don't see him being afraid to leave the spot.
There's too much dog and not enough pedestrians ignoring the beggar.